God Idea: Babi, bull of baboons, Baboon god (Egyptian)

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Babi god idea:
Babi is the Egyptian deity of baboon.
Babi will be a physical bruiser

Lore:
not much, he is said to be the first born son of Osiris. He is said to also be an underworld deity, an is bloodthirsty, living off of entrails and souls. He is ferocious, pretty much the alpha male of baboons, that is a deity.

Health: 460
Mana: 168
Speed: 360
Range: 15 (melee)
Attack per sec: 0.9 (+0.04)
Physical power: 38 (+2.6)
Magical power: 0
Physical protection: 20 (+0.9)
Magical power: 30? (+0.7)
Health regen: 7 (+0.75)
Mana regen: 4 (+0.3)

Appearance:
- um a big baboon with silver (not white ) fur,and duh a red butt
- big teeth (like fangs)
- maybe some armor? (Would he need it?)
- a crown or helmet (I have seen a picture with a sun icon over his head like Isis)

Passive: Dominant Baboon:
- Babi decreases enemy gods physical and magical power as well as their speed
Protection decrease: 20%
Speed decrease: 20%

Move #1: Bull of Baboons:
- Babi dashes forward, this knocks enemies up and does physical damage to enemies.
(Is it possible to be knocked up for a certain amount of time? Is so maybe 2 secs?)
Physical damage:
110/150/190/230/270(32% of physical power)
Mana cost:
60/65/70/75/80
Cool down time: 10 secs

Move #2: Knock Down
- Babi picks up an god and throws them in the air (knocked upwards)then, Babi jumps and slams them into the ground, doing physical damage to gods. (If an enemy is already knocked up, he'll just jump up and slam them down.
Physical damage:
100/130/160/190/220 (35% of your physical power)
Mana cost:
70/90/110/130/150
Cool down time: 12 secs

Move #3: Shattering Pound:
- Babi pounds the earth with both fists cracking the earth, this does physical damage to enemies. This also stuns enemies.
Stun duration: 1 sec
Physical damage:
115/150/185/220/255 (+35%of physical power)
Mana cost:
70/75/80/85/90
Cool down time: 10 secs

Ultimate: Alpha's Fury:
- Babi lets out a furious howl, that indicates his ultimate, he dashes forward stomping the ground with his left hand first, then keeps moving stomping the ground with his right hand, finally ending his ultimate with Babi flipping in the air stomping both hands in front of him. This will do physical damage to enemies and stun them.
Stun duration: 2 secs
Physical damage:
180/220/260/300/340 (+40 of physical power)
Mana cost:
80/100/120/140/160
Cool down time: 90 secs

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No one really... Meh ok

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K honestly, it haven't even been a full day sense you made it, and this s clearly a bump. So for anyone else out there who does **** like this, warning, I will pull an ICEN and rage so hard. So just stop, this is being stupid.

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?.... what did I do wrong? I'll stop if you want me to, but I don't know what I did wrong, I just posted an idea, if you want me to I can delete it but... I just want to know what I did wrong, is the profile bad, or what?

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You made a "Nobody commented, so I'll bump and make an assumed poor-me remark" thing. Some people, like M4XiiMUS, hate that. It's only been a day since you wrote the idea, so don't worry. M4X was the only one who commented on mine and I'm not fretting.

As for the idea itself.

To start, he's squishy as all hell. He has NO health, and that does not work on a bruiser. He is also rather slow attack speed wise. Look at some Gods in-game and try to fix that.

I don't like the passive. It is extremely situational. It basically makes someone who is fed even more fed, but if they're behind they're even more behind because they don't have an effective passive as the other Gods do.

1: This is a bit confusing. He flails like he's crazy, then picks an enemy up and knocks them down? Please specify EXACTLY what he would do. It kinda sounds like two abilities in one. Also... there's no scale to it. It needs a lot more damage if he's a bruiser.

2: On a bruiser, this doesn't work. A bruiser would not want the enemy to run away from them, and already this is sounding reminiscent of mixed with . I would consider changing this ability, because it doesn't match very well.

3. NO DAMAGE. Plus, this monkey already has NO CC aside from the fear/silence, so this ability should have much more damage and some sort of CC, like a stun.

Ultimate: Do I need to say that there's no damage here? Also, does this ability cling onto an enemy, like , or does he just flail wildly like his 1 and hope to hit an enemy?

I'll be honest, I'm not fond of this idea. I've given my reasons why. Consider revising a lot of this. Also, I should mention that in "Egyptian Hell" a lake of fire, where souls are literally annihilated, is guarded by Baboons. Maybe make that an Ultimate of sorts? There is a lot you can do to make this better.

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Ok I'm sorry I shouldn't of done that, I was thinking that it might be stupid, but I did it anyway, I'm really sorry
I never knew people can be so harsh, like really. I'm sorry I'll edit it, not all people's ideas are perfect the first time and if they are good for you. I was trying out an idea, it didnt work so I'll edit it ok.

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Sorry if I did sound angry, I just don't like people raging for small things, but pretty much saying "pitty me" was stupid and I am sorry

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Ok, you did nothing wrong, it just really really REALLY annoys me when people do that. So really I should be apologizing. Therefore, I'm sorry.

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Never assume that anything that I say is said in an angry fashion unless I directly insult you. If I directly insult someone, THEN you may do so. 'Tis not the case here, rest assured.

Hmm... I still see some issues. The passive is still situational, which I'm never fond of but it's better than the first.

I'm not fond of the second ability being an extension of the first. It basically means that you have an ability that is useless if the other is on cooldown or if you miss.

More damage. Really, the abilities need more damage. 26% phys. power contribution is little to nothing.

Let me put it this way: You have a very situational bruiser, with extremely low health and little damage. It's getting better, but I'm still not feeling the sexy here. BRING ON THE SEXY!

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Ok I'll add more damage and technically I thought I put it that any enemy that is already knocked up, then he can slam them for his 2? But I'll add more damage for the moves.

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God Idea: Babi, bull of baboons, Baboon god (Egyptian)

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