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Okay, this is a preemptive list. In fact...

I'm gonna give another week for entries to be edited and whatnot, because A. Some of these, I can't judge because they are THAT incomplete. And B. [size=5I need to fine new judges. Consider this another round a feedback.[/size] On another note, Faith has been removed as a category since judges will probably not know the fandom they are seeing.

FaTaLiTyFiReFlY's King Worm, the King of Worms

Janitsu's ****er, the One and Only

Pentargonite's Batman, the Dark Knight

Firraria's Dexter, the Serial Killer

FerrumSlash's Reisen U****ein Inaba, Lunacy-Inducing Moon Rabbit

Dark Jaw's Xenomorph

HolyPudding's Tirek, the Magic Reaper

I'm done for today. More later. Tired.

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Updated!
Ty for feedback :D

why does wukong look so much different now?

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Yeh. I sux at making kits.

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Sub, i think you mess up the scoring, the earlier one's balance score is from -5 until 0 while the later one is 0 until 5

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No the balance is x/10 ,

The completeness is 0/-5 since it doesn't count anything but if the idea is incomplete you lose points.

why does wukong look so much different now?

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Dis not fair, wasn't here :P

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No the balance is x/10 ,

The completeness is 0/-5 since it doesn't count anything but if the idea is incomplete you lose points.

Oh yeah, my bad. then I mean they typo is the ferrumslash's one. Sub inserted balance section in completeness section

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Another round of reports.

Mekali's Kranon the Relentless

shakz180's Elsa, the Snow Queen

Devampi's Ezio auditore Da firzenze

HiFromBuddha's Dante, the Demon Hunter

Orignality: 4. There's an inevitable comparison to Lucian, but you put your own take on it, which is nice.

Completion: -1. The one thing that is missing is the arrangement of the orbs; like, is it something like Nu Wa's Clay Soldiers, or is it more like a recastable Trasngressors Fate? Can we place them from range, making it possible to use like a projectile, or is it in melee range, requiring you to place them carefully beforehand?

Balance: 10. Just, really, really well-balanced. He sports a ton of mobility, and scales fantastically well into the late game, as well as a unique zoning utility that makes Art's traps look completely lame, but he lacks CC. If I have one problem, it's that his ultimate may be a bit too weak at first rank.

Synergy: 3. His steroid, passive, and ultimate all flow together beautifully, while his dash is the core of his mobility and one of his defining traits. However, the one thing that doesn't fit (or doesn't seem to fit, as it could do different things depending on the range) is the Orbs, and the close range of his dash, which honestly feels suicidal no matter what stage of the game you are in, but especially in the laning phase. At any rate, a zoning tool is certainly unique on an ADC, but still is rather odd.

Suggestions: I'd make his Orbs deal splash damage and be used for waveclear. ****py waveclear, and you can still make it unsafe waveclear by adjusting Orb range, but still better than making him spend an escape at lethally close ranged. Alternatively, have him fire his guns in a line as he dashes, still giving him risk by making him burn his escape to clear, but making it less insanely suicidal. (Like, to prevent it from being too good, you can have it deal less damage on piercing, or make it not pierce at all, aka the Heart Bomb problem.) (Or another solution, have him dash, but as soon as he hits something, he does a backwards flip, shooting whatever he hit and around it in a small AoE, making his waveclear a bit safer, but still rewarding risk and stuff - as well as being really cool-looking).

Spark: Yes. Duh.

Overall: 16 points. The main thing holding this idea back is the disynergy (shut up, it's a word because I say it is) between the close range portion of the dash and the rest of his long range, kiting based kit. But aside form that, this is still one of the best ideas in this competition.