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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Sirsir94 » November 26, 2013 8:54am | Report
Its up there. Second post on this page.
EDIT: last page...
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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Subzero008 » November 26, 2013 3:43pm | Report
Sirsir94 wrote:

Its up there. Second post on this page.
EDIT: last page...


Wow, it took me a while to realize it was already there. Silly me.

I'm impressed. I like the distribution of wordiness. The action-y parts are more concise, while the descriptions of the monsters are more detailed. Very good.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Talenhiem » November 26, 2013 4:17pm | Report
Congrats, you caught my character building the concentration for my initiating move, which would take a lot of it.

I'll probably take out the big one first, to show badassness... he's gonna explode. Next would be the average one, which I will duel with for a moment, then kill what the time comes. Then I'll outwit the third one with something it cannot start to comprehend... he'll be executed loki-style.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Dark Jaw » November 26, 2013 4:26pm | Report
I think you should add Kleet to the Unknow Editor's group. He is an ally of them, but may join the Adventurer's.I'm also writing the background story of Kleet'sar, and why he is an ally of the Editors.

Plus, I got some ideas for the Weak NPCs you mentioned, may post them later.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Subzero008 » November 26, 2013 4:54pm | Report
Dark Jaw wrote:

I think you should add Kleet to the Unknow Editor's group. He is an ally of them, but may join the Adventurer's.I'm also writing the background story of Kleet'sar, and why he is an ally of the Editors.

Plus, I got some ideas for the Weak NPCs you mentioned, may post them later.


I assume Kleet is the name of the Necroserpent character, right? I'll add it in.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Subzero008 » November 27, 2013 2:19am | Report
I have a few ideas for NPCs:

Here is 'generic' one, the average member of the city guard. I will stress that these traits are the average. There will be some higher ones, like the commanding officer and the personal guard of something or other.


NPC:City Watch


And here's a neutral NPC:

NPC: Nicodemus

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Sirsir94 » November 27, 2013 8:07am | Report
@Tal actually I want Nixaze (the snake) to eat the little one as its running away from you.
@Sub I'm flattered, ty. Also I have a feeling Nicodemus is gonna have one of those Izuka moments at some point.
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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Sirsir94 » November 28, 2013 7:17am | Report
Okies, finished.
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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Talenhiem » November 28, 2013 7:50am | Report
Ok. The medium one is supposed to be the smart one, so I think I'll outsmart him.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Subzero008 » November 28, 2013 7:52am | Report
I like it. I like it a lot.

Fav part: The fire spell turning the cave a bit warmer. That was brilliant.

Had a few typos, but I understood that things were a bit hectic. But you have my thumbs-up.

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